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Just a Thought

by Ashok Sharda

I am not the self

I intend to be

As I am not in the moment

 

Ahead is not where the ACT is

That provides the stage to the self

That can be and act

 

I must act NOW to BE

And stop thinking of not thinking

 

In these moments of thoughtlessness

I stop feeling emotional

About me

09/26/2005

Posted on 03/21/2006
Copyright © 2024 Ashok Sharda

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 03/22/06 at 02:06 PM

lovely introspective voyage into life and wordplay...nice read, all the best, jewels

Posted by Brian Francis on 03/24/06 at 02:40 AM

You think therefore you are Though what you are may not be what you thought to be. That you is but a dream it is past choices that have made you what you are in the moment.. . Loved it nice work. -bf

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/06 at 10:06 PM

Very profound - "in these moments of thoughtlessness, I stop feeling emotional about me". I must act!

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/26/06 at 01:43 PM

I have missed reading your thoughful, introspective philosophy, Ashok. It's wonderful to see a wonderful new posting...

Posted by Jim Benz on 03/27/06 at 04:49 AM

And stop thinking of not thinking that about sums it up! Interesting poem Ashok.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/27/06 at 03:19 PM

§ meditative brilliance — please continue! §

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/06 at 07:38 PM

Thoughtlessness...I hardly think so. This is an amazing little maze of a poem, reading more into itself with each run through.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/11/06 at 12:44 AM

My daughter used to tell me that she could put herself into a state of thoughtletness- maybe she really was telling the truth! Excellent write!

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