Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Julie Adams on 03/22/06 at 02:06 PM lovely introspective voyage into life and wordplay...nice read, all the best, jewels |
Posted by Brian Francis on 03/24/06 at 02:40 AM You think therefore you are Though what you are may not be what you thought to be. That you is but a dream it is past choices that have made you what you are in the moment.. .
Loved it nice work. -bf |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/06 at 10:06 PM Very profound - "in these moments of thoughtlessness, I stop feeling emotional about me". I must act! |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/26/06 at 01:43 PM I have missed reading your thoughful, introspective philosophy, Ashok. It's wonderful to see a wonderful new posting... |
Posted by Jim Benz on 03/27/06 at 04:49 AM And stop thinking of not thinking that about sums it up! Interesting poem Ashok. |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/27/06 at 03:19 PM § meditative brilliance — please continue! § |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/06 at 07:38 PM Thoughtlessness...I hardly think so. This is an amazing little maze of a poem, reading more into itself with each run through. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/11/06 at 12:44 AM My daughter used to tell me that she could put herself into a state of thoughtletness- maybe she really was telling the truth! Excellent write! |