Impatient Toes by Nicole AssenzaIm dancing and
rose petals are
hopes I just finished crushing
Im dancing and
my heels are long and black
can balance
Im always reaching up
what are we?
Im looking foward
get home quick
I gotta
dance some more circles
watch you
lean, against the walls
you win
what a trick
in honesty
thats saying nothing
have no idea
if you like roses
if you like me,
spiderlong legs
good for a hand
good to think about
impatient toes
crushing roses
you never gave me
crazy
that its my heart
Im dancing on
03/15/2006 Author's Note: Can't even tell if he likes me or not.
Posted on 03/16/2006 Copyright © 2025 Nicole Assenza
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Brian Francis on 03/21/06 at 02:01 AM Crushingly beautiful perspective on the human condition. Wonderfully done. peace --bf |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/23/14 at 02:25 PM I enjoyed this POTD! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/23/14 at 03:01 PM Excellent addition to the POTD category. Glad I had a chance to read this. Impactful expression, thanks to the construction and imagery. |
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