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Wilt

by Robin Patterson


undernourished, but one     could never tell-

I hide it well under    my thick skin

when the truth is     sometimes the slightest hint

of your warm breath    filled salty whispers

blown with precision      toward all my vulnerable spots

or anywhere inbetween    could bring me to my knees

where I know you would        guide me

to take root as I fumble     to please

and when I realize it      has been

so long since I've       tangled my life up

in this kind of           dysfunctional dependence

that I know longer     recognize its potential

to bury me until I      see that no amount

of your sweat      or my tears

could make         me wilt any less

than I        am right now



02/13/2006

Posted on 02/13/2006
Copyright © 2024 Robin Patterson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/14/06 at 01:40 AM

Excellent! Definitely recommending for POTD. :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/18/06 at 02:04 PM

I see you too like to use spacing in your poems. An intriguing piece in its clear honesty.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/19/09 at 09:07 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 10:35 PM

...well written robin, deserving of POTD...chas

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