Wilt by Robin Patterson
undernourished, but one could never tell-
I hide it well under my thick skin
when the truth is sometimes the slightest hint
of your warm breath filled salty whispers
blown with precision toward all my vulnerable spots
or anywhere inbetween could bring me to my knees
where I know you would guide me
to take root as I fumble to please
and when I realize it has been
so long since I've tangled my life up
in this kind of dysfunctional dependence
that I know longer recognize its potential
to bury me until I see that no amount
of your sweat or my tears
could make me wilt any less
than I am right now
02/13/2006 Posted on 02/13/2006 Copyright © 2024 Robin Patterson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/14/06 at 01:40 AM Excellent! Definitely recommending for POTD. :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/18/06 at 02:04 PM I see you too like to use spacing in your poems. An intriguing piece in its clear honesty. |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/19/09 at 09:07 PM Congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 10:35 PM ...well written robin, deserving of POTD...chas |
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