| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 02/04/06 at 08:46 PM Its imagery trips through my head and I hear a young Michael York, or perhaps Tim Curry, doing it as a narrative over a wide screen visual production... both fluid and ripe with a unique JD poetic charm (multi-spiritual?) - Bra-vo! - RCat the Jaded |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/04/06 at 08:56 PM I love these twelve lines of poetry. They'er pretty awesome. Excellent jadi! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/04/06 at 09:13 PM Adds a wonderfully whole new meaning to extraterrestrial jadi. I always look forward to latest product from you and your many muses. Peace bro. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/05/06 at 05:33 AM The mixture of mythology and imagery takes me to another place. The spareness of words leaves the mystery still to be solved, if indeed it will. Wow, how I love this.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 02/06/06 at 09:44 PM Mystical, mythical, magical... the imagery takes my breath away. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/07/06 at 03:20 AM Far out Jadi! Glad to see you writing again...Charlie |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 02/08/06 at 12:49 AM You've been traveling again you lucky dog.
It takes a special artist to reveal indescribable beauty. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/20/06 at 04:54 AM Your poem makes me yearn for just a glimpse of the stars you reflect with one eye on history and myth and the other on the heavenly bodies. I enjoy the very subtle sense of movement, ebb and flow. Quite lovely, my grandpoet friend. Thank you. |
| Posted by Michael Faraday on 03/14/06 at 09:29 PM ^what they all said...well written and all that jazz. :) |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/23/07 at 03:56 AM Ten thousand diluvian lessons blink the eye and the slivered moon slow dances the drench of day in this wonderspace where souls can sip and sing, laugh and tango to the light of Saturn moons till the sunrise calls them home … A space where the limestone coast and the sea of light are one mystic kiss. Oh! never more beautiful a song nor whisperwind more melodious than when bridging the Cinque Terre with the pale blue star in Capricorn’s womb! … I love this poem, Maestro. Each stanza is a sparkling gem and the light of each harmonizes to create this universe where sky meets earth and all is magic … Maybe ‘tis there, nelle Cinque Terre, that dreams are seeded …How it fascinates me that astrologically speaking Saturn be the planet that rules Capricorn … I, being Capricorn have such affinities with Saturn … how could I not love this Song ... lovelight&peace*m.a |
