| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/04/06 at 07:34 AM For sure! I'm hooked too!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 02/04/06 at 06:38 PM Nice addition my dear friend ;-) I'm likin' it! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/07/06 at 07:49 PM Soulo! —you are far-out cool with haiku! - please keep imbibing! —Euphoric Reader |
| Posted by Deborah Breuer on 08/30/06 at 11:12 PM All I got to say is WOW!...okay I lied, I'm gonna say more. Very Marqui de Sade...I admire your ability to evoke such a personal response within a relatively non-emotional person such as myself. This work is well driven in that I wouldn't mind, okay I lied again, I would love to see a more explicit extended version of this poem. Perhaps we can combine our experiences to create something worthy of such a source. Great job...thanks |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/20/07 at 09:00 PM mmm, I like this a lot! Of course, I admit to haiku envy - not a form I have quite figured out - practice, practice, practice.... |
