|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/12/06 at 02:11 PM|
This is far too broad in concept to be a real haiku. And you are not dealing with a moment in nature. (Others may disagree.) Its message is forceful and thoughtprovoking.
|Posted by Mara Meade on 01/16/06 at 04:50 PM|
Proper form or not, this makes my mother's arms ache to hold her "children" in safety.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/06 at 03:09 PM|
Powerful reminder of Iraq, and the poor civilians caught in the crossfire.