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Green Zone II

by Kristina Woodhill

Will it never end?
The guns and mortar scare us
When can we come in?

01/10/2006

Posted on 01/11/2006
Copyright © 2021 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/12/06 at 02:11 PM

This is far too broad in concept to be a real haiku. And you are not dealing with a moment in nature. (Others may disagree.) Its message is forceful and thoughtprovoking.

Posted by Mara Meade on 01/16/06 at 04:50 PM

Proper form or not, this makes my mother's arms ache to hold her "children" in safety.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/06 at 03:09 PM

Powerful reminder of Iraq, and the poor civilians caught in the crossfire.

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