Elizabeth Jill by Kristina Woodhill Elizabeth Jill I love you still Although you outed me. Your “Once upon a time” Request To write a poem, “Just add the rest” This said with smile hid whimsically behind your keyboard far from me. What have you done To me? My closed-tight mind You opened wide Now words spin round They now decide When I shall work And play and sleep At 3 a.m. I try to keep My sanity as letters Form the words that Form the thoughts That flow from me. How do I stop this flood? Elizabeth Jill IÂ’ll love you till The cows come home Pink pigs fly by A baby needs No lullabye. Until at last My time is done And words IÂ’ll Need no more. 01/06/2006 Posted on 01/06/2006 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/08/06 at 06:13 AM so,... your friend has noticed before that many many words come 'long galloping and cantering all aloft and surrounding you, eh? ::: that's some whisker whispering that begs for the 'A Cat's Tale :) :) :) ::: ^_^ ::: Life with poets! ::: rolling on a river, you! ::: —love you JiLLions! Posted by Mara Meade on 01/09/06 at 05:33 PM This made my toes curl in delight! The twists, turns, and subtle little "gooses" that end up helping us express an inner voice.... this is precious. Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/06 at 02:13 PM Poignant confirmation of an artistic friendship, that like your poems, will hopefully last millennia. Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/25/07 at 12:24 PM How delightful, how amusing in the truest sense! I love the "smile hid whimsically behind your keyboard far from me". Yes, yes, I can feel it too! How we inspire one another. I love this, and found in this folder... it makes me think she has encouraged your head to fill with words on this! Wonderful, with a musical, teasing poetic feel. Posted by Laura Doom on 12/16/09 at 03:45 PM ha! -- tell me about it... [any excuse to revisit your babbling delightfest :>) Posted by George Hoerner on 02/18/10 at 03:23 PM A great write and commentary on what must have been a wonderful relaionship. We don't get a lot of those in one lifetime. Posted by Mo Couts on 07/03/11 at 02:49 AM What a wonderful friend-love poem! Those friends are rare...so it's always awesome to see it written about =) Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)