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Falling Stars

frosted falling stars
millions of lost wishes
gathered in my hands

12/29/2005

Posted on 12/30/2005
Copyright © 2026 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 12/30/05 at 02:41 PM

Love this wintery image!

Posted by Jim Benz on 01/03/06 at 12:40 AM

Melissa, this is very nice.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/03/06 at 08:13 PM

small diamonds glisten just as bright...and this one gleams, Mel!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/05/06 at 01:06 AM

A star of a haiku Mel...Charlie

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/14/15 at 09:07 PM

Really a fine visual concept here. Congrats on POTD!

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