| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/08/05 at 03:13 PM Ditto on all the previous comments. There is much strength and rightiousness in the brevity of your words Mara. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/08/05 at 11:05 PM A mighty pen Mara - good to read you again :> |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 11/09/05 at 03:55 PM Well, love will never sustain unless it moves onwards. Love can only survive in the growth of the lovers, loving religiously. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 11/09/05 at 04:05 PM Is it the love that moves the lovers onward, or is it the lovers who move the love onward? I believe it is the latter. A wonderful little piece you have here. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/04/06 at 07:36 PM Brilliant, just brilliant! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/28/06 at 11:50 AM and neither shall I carry and burden that sword and I would take no umbrage with your words but marvel and go pilgriming along with love. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/11/06 at 01:23 PM Oh where have I been and not been yet? Finding this poem is like finding God's campfire. Warmed by the glow. Beautiful. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/08 at 01:22 AM So brief yet so full of meaning! Love propels the pilgrim (Christian one anyway). No weapon but love and truth need she or he. Great writing. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/08 at 01:22 AM So brief yet so full of meaning! Love propels the pilgrim (Christian one anyway). No weapon but love and truth need she or he. Great writing. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/28/13 at 12:14 PM yet as meaningful today herein, mara |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/27/20 at 05:47 PM You said alot in an economy of words |
