| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/08/05 at 11:34 PM I wait expectantly...
God I hate a challenge lol OK, it drew me in as you knew it would. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/08/05 at 11:36 PM By the way, i like this, "I turn toward the light,seeking warmth,"
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| Posted by Ava Blu on 10/09/05 at 04:27 AM oohh this is wonderful. "spotlight on an empty stage"--brilliant. title is so perfect. i'm waiting too. |
| Posted by Scott Cadence on 10/09/05 at 06:12 PM Your my new favorite poet. This is wonderful. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/10/05 at 07:53 AM my comment hobbles in late but, I do really like this also. I read it and wonder what lies below the tip of this 'berg...kudos.. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 10/11/05 at 02:28 PM Ohh, Heide, just as I expected ... this is a masterpiece in itself. I was hooked from the beginning. " ... spotlight on
an empty stage." ... pulled this poem towards a trajectory of unknowns, while " ... I turn toward the light,
seeking warmth, ..." ... pulled me in and set the stage for more. :)
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| Posted by Bradd Howard on 10/11/05 at 08:39 PM lovely description... yeah I feel like this every morning :) great write friend |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/15/05 at 04:20 PM Like the opening of a new play, love the buildup of anticipation in this piece, and the way you set the stage for it. Kudos! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/11/05 at 12:10 AM very nicely conveyed metaphor..well written |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 03/19/08 at 11:33 AM Congratulations on POTD. I missed this and I'm sure glad it made it. Beautifully done!! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/19/08 at 04:41 PM I'm SO curious!!! But of course I'm sure that's what you MEANT to do...LOL!! Congratulations on POTD! |
