very beautiful. I've just read it quickly, but to me it's about faith being born or born again in someone.

With Maureen I see this as an expression of "new birth" (in a Christian perspective). Reminds me of St. Paul writing about believers moving from "glory to glory".

This certainly does fuel the imagination..... Just like every woman that yearns to have a child...this is it seems to me, the equivalent of that for a man.

Indeed this has the aura of a spiritual song, a proclamation of life as a gift stemming from the source of all ages, "Calling out �You father that Art my mother Give me the light of day Let me breathe Let me see the sky�" - the personification of life through the father (and mother) then becomes the "right" of every seed instilled with the strength to extend its essence outwards. This has the feeling of an old psalm. Nicely done.

it is almost like a song, but one that is often forgotten. the bond between a man and baby is very powerful, very well-expressed :)

' Inside me You�re a work of art Refining itself A product of evolution Beyond our control Fueled from a Limitless power source Called love'yes, this is work of awareness, of life aware of living. Fly, without feeling the burden because life is weightless, death is burdensome.This is so metaphysical and one of the best to have appeared in recent times out of your head.I like this immensely.

It is so cool to read a man's take on the miracle of birth-to-life. You stretch your awareness into the growing possibilities of nurturance from within. You cast us into the light of new life. Blessings to you for a beautiful poem, Chris.