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Cursed to Fight: A Battle Between Life and Death

by Ashok Sharda


Life has four dimensions
Length, breadth, depth and time
Death is one dimensional
Merged with the time
Chasing you to your end
Preventing you from setting and embarking
Alluring, eluding, keeping your senses dissipated
In the game death plays with you
Disguised as life

Death won't stop
Nor will it leave you alone, face to face
Dragging you to an assumed world
Without letting you ever know
What life IS

Life has a face
If only you can walk
Out of those dreams
Death continues to interlace
Within and around you

Merge your self into space and
The death will emerge as LIFE
Embrace one moment
Look deep into LifeÂ’s eye
Don't demand, but give
Life demands only life
And will give you more
If you give life, the life

There's NOWHERE to go
So, better all doors shall be closed
Instead of trying to live, try to UNDEATH
Stopping death from galloping over life
It's a battle between life and death
you are cursed to fight

09/05/2005

Posted on 09/05/2005
Copyright © 2024 Ashok Sharda

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 09/05/05 at 05:01 PM

Let me be the first to say that somehow I am suddenly feeling the urge to smoke a hukkah. Some subliminal message here? hahahaha I'll be back with a real comment later ;-)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/06/05 at 11:42 AM

Absoluely engaging! The struggle with death is both conscious and unconscious. Yet, you eloquently point out that embracing life is the way to successfully deal with death. (From a Christian perspective, as St. Paul wrote. "Death is swallowed up in victory{through faith in Christ}. Death where is your sting. Death where is your victory.")

Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/07/05 at 01:16 AM

Death is one dimensional... it is singular of purpose. It is not distracted even though it distracts. Death does not stop yet it makes others stop. Death preaches one thing and does the other. There are so many dimensions to this verse. It is a beautiful singularity that gives and takes and is.

Posted by Jim Benz on 09/07/05 at 01:21 AM

If you can't live life to the fullest, at least try to "undeath" - I like that. Right here, right now, unless you're already dead, LIVE. There's so much around us, every moment, every answer, every question. Here. Now. Wonderful poem.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/07/05 at 01:53 AM

Thought provoking piece Ashok. I especially like the last stanza: Instead of trying to live, try to UNDEATH Stopping death from galloping over life

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/07/05 at 02:54 PM

I think it is Life which is overrated and inflated and Death that often gets the bad wrap and I think it is Death that is infinitesmaly dimensioned and a place for which the lifeless will be looking forward to riding its every facet. and one can only imagine what death will do to a poet, but it is not so far fetched or noble and it certainly will not be the end of him or her or his or her profession, but in lifes ebbing, from their scattered ashes these themselves will be recast as muses to ever living voices.

Posted by Rula Shin on 09/07/05 at 05:08 PM

What is death? Is it physical? Or is it as they say “energy can neither be created nor destroyed”. If such is the case, then physical death is not that which you are speaking of. Our true end lies in our absence, our perpetual state of living unconsciousness, “Life has four dimensions Length, breadth, depth and time Death is one dimensional Merged with the time” – yes, death is one dimensional, merged with the TIME and is not necessarily marked by the physical demise of the body. Rather, death is the lack of presence or true awareness/consciousness. How can one say he is LIVING if he is letting his mind define his being, continually missing the moment, the NOW? Declarations such as “I am what my history has made me” or “I will become fulfilled when in the future this or that happens” – Why can’t we all SEE that the past and the future live ONLY in the realm of the mind, as projections of the mind. Why can’t we see that time, in this sense, is nonexistent? Just as past and future are illusions, so too is TIME, yet our mind is bound to it, unable to release itself from it’s constraints because it is unable to BE in complete Presence, which, of course, is timeless. What other moment has there ever been? What other moment will there ever be other than NOW? But then, such a thing can’t just be a believe but must be experienced to be known. “Death plays with you Disguised as life…Merge your self into space and The death will emerge as LIFE” – Well, we must use the Time only for practical purposes, going back into our history only to gather information we need in the now, or looking to the future only if we are to act on its goal in the now, otherwise, we are chasing our death, missing ourselves HERE. “There's NOWHERE to go…Instead of trying to live, try to UNDEATH” – Yes, try to UNDO the selves who chase the death relentlessly, the “I” allowing them to take the wheel by looking the other way. That’s what I saw Ashok. I wish if we can all SEE the true nature of the battle we are cursed to fight.

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 09/09/05 at 04:05 PM

you say so much, AShok. LIFE is LIFE and DEATH is DEATH...you explore the journey betwixt the two, quite amazingly through this supposition...

Posted by Bethany Lee on 05/16/08 at 02:14 PM

Hah! I see the hookah, too! That's awesome! I'll smoke some barhaini shisha just for you, Ashok!

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