| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/07/05 at 08:01 PM Two lines, Bradd, which sum things up so well. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/07/05 at 08:02 PM Oops, I forgot to say I think it might read better if broken up into three lines though. :) |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 06/07/05 at 10:26 PM ha |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 06/09/05 at 03:51 PM so much said with so few words! Great... |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 06/10/05 at 03:20 AM haha That it does! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/10/05 at 05:38 PM Yes, so far the two are lovers and not love.I agree in toto. |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 06/21/05 at 02:56 AM I could never pinpoint the problems with love- and there it is |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 12/23/05 at 10:39 AM Re Kyles comment, you could also make it a single liner - something more commonly seen in japanese haiku. After all the breaks are very clear without actually having line breaks.
I like this poem. It WORKS. |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 12/01/06 at 09:16 PM HAHAHA thats the best 2 lines i think i have ever read....kudos! |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 12/12/06 at 11:34 PM ditt-o. |
