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A-museing

by Bradd Howard

I hate being in love
everything just gets so... god damn personal.

06/07/2005

Posted on 06/07/2005
Copyright © 2020 Bradd Howard

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/07/05 at 08:01 PM

Two lines, Bradd, which sum things up so well.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/07/05 at 08:02 PM

Oops, I forgot to say I think it might read better if broken up into three lines though. :)

Posted by Paul Marino on 06/07/05 at 10:26 PM

ha

Posted by Kimberly Bare on 06/09/05 at 03:51 PM

so much said with so few words! Great...

Posted by Ava Blu on 06/10/05 at 03:20 AM

haha That it does!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/10/05 at 05:38 PM

Yes, so far the two are lovers and not love.I agree in toto.

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 06/21/05 at 02:56 AM

I could never pinpoint the problems with love- and there it is

Posted by Paganini Jones on 12/23/05 at 10:39 AM

Re Kyles comment, you could also make it a single liner - something more commonly seen in japanese haiku. After all the breaks are very clear without actually having line breaks. I like this poem. It WORKS.

Posted by Kristi Paik on 12/01/06 at 09:16 PM

HAHAHA thats the best 2 lines i think i have ever read....kudos!

Posted by Cristy M. on 12/12/06 at 11:34 PM

ditt-o.

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