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A Lotta Lotta
by Charles E MinshallI eat a lot, I eat a lot,
I eat a lot I do,
I weigh a lot, I weigh a lot,
I weigh a lot too.
I hate a lot, I hate a lot,
I hate a lotta weight,
Gotta lose a lotta, lose a lotta,
Lose a lot I hate.
05/20/2005 Author's Note: I just liked the meter...Charlie
Posted on 05/20/2005
Copyright © 2024 Charles E Minshall
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/21/05 at 01:28 AM Very funny! Self-derprecating, but gotta laugh, gotta laugh in sympathy. (I seldom eat a lot and need to gain weight. Could we make a little exchange here Charlie? LOL!) |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 05/22/05 at 04:48 AM A big bowl of ice cream helps me get through these moments of weakness! - Nice read, Chuck! - RCatski |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 05/22/05 at 07:56 AM Ha Ha...I read alotta, I read alotta of your poems ...well you get the idea....good one. |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 05/23/05 at 10:01 PM LOL! I like it ... *smiles* |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/05 at 02:29 PM Lotta use of catchy repetition and rhythm to deliver the goodies. |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/26/05 at 06:51 PM Mmm... that last line is rather profound I think. It doesn't actually say what one tends to expect. An incredibly neat twist. THIS goes on my favourites immediately. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 04/21/08 at 04:42 AM Hi Charles,
Great write, fun read. Me likes it. :)
Well, sometimes, ya just gotta go with the flow of things. :) |
| Posted by Samiah Haque on 05/08/09 at 12:57 AM as paganini says-i did not expect the ending-that was the beauty to this piece, an example-proof of exactly what it was you were trying to illustrate. wonderful piece :) |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 07/30/09 at 08:26 PM If you have kids/grandkids, you must be a hit with them :) |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/01/09 at 08:37 PM As usual, CharMin, fun and functional...the is addictive! Thanks |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 08/02/09 at 10:13 PM This poem is a good one to post on my fridge. Cute! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/03/09 at 04:49 PM Hey Charlie. Great to see this on the top 10. Talk about a second coming! And yes, great meter. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/03/09 at 08:19 PM hehehehehehehe - gotta love this. ;) |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/04/09 at 09:25 PM ...i like the meter too and the lil' way you are all over the subject, and cutely too. |
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