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Senryu for a Barber

by Maureen Glaude

that hunk of a barber
has her
all in a lather

03/24/2005

Posted on 03/24/2005
Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/24/05 at 09:51 PM

I like how this short but impactful piece can be interpreted as both romantic and sexual in its expression. Well done.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/10/05 at 03:31 AM

Ha! This one brought a big smile and a chuckle. Clever clever clever!!!

Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/07/05 at 05:48 PM

Woo Hooo!
How about changing 'her' to 'him'???
I like this. It works well and provokes a response. A good senyru.

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