Not bad. Text well reflective of the title. Dark but refreshingly different in its expression.

the graveyard is my heart and I am buried under him ~ this is amazing ~ made me turn inside my memories of him(us)

that was great. so smooth with the stop and go, with the subtle rhyming. i would like to see, "inside this empty graveyard" be changed to, "inside this empty grave", but in the end the sentiments of this poem carry it through.

wonderfully worded and carried across.