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alucinada
by Carolyn Covilleyou make me feel like...
a little girl, awed in your presence
before you i am fragile,
more delicate than a butterfly's wing,
my insides shatter when i hear your voice
nevermind when i feel your touch
imaginary lines exist between us;
discreetly i tip toe through each one,
yet you remain out of reach
you are the candy i cannot have before dinner,
even though i know you'll never spoil my appetite. 10/09/2004 Author's Note: alucinada: spanish, 'stunned'...random thoughts about what he does to me...
Posted on 03/07/2005
Copyright © 2024 Carolyn Coville
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/07/05 at 02:49 AM Truly beautiful in its romantic effect. It seems centuries since I've last felt the same way. Thanks for putting it so eloquently into words Carolyn. Adds to favorites. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/13/05 at 10:16 PM very romantic and sweet...flows very nicely ;) |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 10/09/05 at 01:31 AM mm... the ending is stellar. so sexy. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/12/06 at 01:27 PM Beautiful POTD! Such a light, tender touch to this. |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 08/12/06 at 08:01 PM yay so glad to see this as POTD! love love.
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