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hermit

by Michele Schottelkorb

All the lonely people, where do they all come from?
All the lonely people, where do they all belong?

~~the Beatles… “Eleanor Rigby”

 

 

he sits alone in his room

contemplating solitary confinement

{death becomes you, you know……………………

      as do the voices in your head}

 

like Eleanor Rigby, nobody notices

and no one remembers his name

and no one will come when his time is done

save for a solo miscreant preacher

taking the afternoon off from immorality

    to perform his civic duty

{did you know you’re not supposed to talk about such things?

      it’s not appropriate…}

 

he’s never been rejected or hated or ridiculed

never been in love or missed or delighted

this lone man says not a word; to anyone

on any day or any year

his memories are those he makes up in his head

or those he sees out his foggy window

isolated in daydreams of nothing

a cracked smile spreads across his nobody face…

 

forgotten memories of a childhood lay in the wasteland that is his being

loneliness crept in, a long time ago

stealing his brilliance and leaving him with naught

he himself does not even remember what it is like

to converse with anyone save himself

and he does not realize his purpose here was aborted

that first day he ceased to exist…

 

and there is more to his story…

why he is the recluse he is

but it doesn’t matter…

you won’t remember him anyway…

 

 

02/28/2005

Author's Note: addition to the graves/schottelkorb creative series... this one makes me sad... reminds me of my grandfather...

Posted on 02/28/2005
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/28/05 at 05:59 PM

...good one michele, throreau said 'we all live lives of quiet desperation' and yet while the poem is seemingly lonely, accordin to oscar wilde 'when we can love ourself, it's the beginning of a life-long love affair...i wish i could be a hermit sometimes, good one! peace,chaz

Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/28/05 at 08:16 PM

Very moving piece Michele, I really connected with it emotionally. You tied together the ideas so eloquently.. and created a portrait of an individual who exists to no one, nor even to themselves at times. Great, penetrating read..

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/01/05 at 03:45 AM

Sad to think that there are actually people out there like this. Frightening when you imagine how they got to be that way.

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/01/05 at 12:12 PM

You connected when writing this piece, Michele. Friggin brilliant! "loneliness crept in, a long time ago stealing his brilliance and leaving him with naught" that's where you caught it! Clever, very clever, my friend :)

Posted by Dana E Brossard on 03/02/05 at 06:13 AM

It does have a very sad feel to it, and is very well written.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/02/05 at 05:12 PM

the lonely. only the lonely are lonely or aren't we all? and where they belong I belong too. I am most at home amidst the lonely, remembering like them when we weren't. God bless you and your grandfather, Michele.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/03/05 at 12:38 AM

I agre with Wendy. "very moving piece of work."...Charlie

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 03/03/05 at 04:19 AM

Very powerful, indeed. You've reminded me to make the effort to reach out to people because they may not be able to do so themselves.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/06/05 at 04:56 AM

This poem is a "could be" mirror, a warning, and a ghost of Christmas future. Wow. Such incredibly haunting imagery and the words... they chisel away at the resolve of the stoutest cynics. Beautiful.

Posted by Laura Doom on 03/07/05 at 08:13 PM

He's not alone in being alone, but doesn't know, and probably doesn't care that this remote connection exists. It's ironic that so many people feel oppressed and intimidated by the demands of instant/constant communication (however shallow in nature), and dream of an isolated existence. Dreams & reality...
Emotive, depressing piece - wonderful stuff.

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