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O Valentine
by Michele Schottelkorb
I walk into the ocean
Luscious laps drip from languid lips
And resuscitate your essence
Emerge from kindred Luna dance
Succulent sauces pour down supple sides
Waking my yearning for you
Turn topple tumble down
Remit renaissance reality to restful resurrection
And envelope me in worship
I take you in
Heartily hold your heavenly honorable head
Within my realm of love
Forever and eternal
Absolute affinity to one alluring aorta
Would you be mine, Love?
02/14/2005 Author's Note: Happy Love Day, my Love...
Posted on 02/14/2005
Copyright © 2025 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/15/05 at 01:18 AM although this holiday i hate, i love the beautiful expressions you've used throughout...lovely poem.. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/15/05 at 02:37 PM flowers and heart shaped goodies are in order and the answer is yes to all of the above. to say this poem has heart and art is an understatement. |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/15/05 at 10:29 PM What a tender tribute to a loved one. I can really feel the emotion you invoke here, with every line. There is something so mesmerizing
that I experienced with it. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/15/05 at 11:21 PM beautiful words, images and sentiments here Michele...amazing work! :) |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 02/16/05 at 03:10 AM Ooo la la! This one is languid, luxuriously sensual, and downright sexy. I gotta love this one, Michele. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/17/05 at 11:48 PM No plain Hallmark card here. Fabulous poetics throughout to make that special someone blush. You've outdone yourself once again Michele. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 02/18/05 at 12:48 AM wowow! is right...this poem is excellentt |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/18/05 at 05:53 PM I sat here softly smiling. rolling the words around in my mouth and off the tip of my tongue... WOW... Great Poem! |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 03/03/05 at 10:12 PM very beautiful poem and sentiments :) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/07/08 at 03:27 PM Congrats on POTD! |
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