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O Valentine

by Michele Schottelkorb

I walk into the ocean

Luscious laps drip from languid lips

And resuscitate your essence

 

Emerge from kindred Luna dance

Succulent sauces pour down supple sides

Waking my yearning for you

 

Turn topple tumble down

Remit renaissance reality to restful resurrection

And envelope me in worship

 

I take you in

Heartily hold your heavenly honorable head

Within my realm of love

 

Forever and eternal

Absolute affinity to one alluring aorta

Would you be mine, Love?

02/14/2005

Author's Note: Happy Love Day, my Love...

Posted on 02/14/2005
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/15/05 at 01:18 AM

although this holiday i hate, i love the beautiful expressions you've used throughout...lovely poem..

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/15/05 at 02:37 PM

flowers and heart shaped goodies are in order and the answer is yes to all of the above. to say this poem has heart and art is an understatement.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/15/05 at 10:29 PM

What a tender tribute to a loved one. I can really feel the emotion you invoke here, with every line. There is something so mesmerizing that I experienced with it.

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/15/05 at 11:21 PM

beautiful words, images and sentiments here Michele...amazing work! :)

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 02/16/05 at 03:10 AM

Ooo la la! This one is languid, luxuriously sensual, and downright sexy. I gotta love this one, Michele.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/17/05 at 11:48 PM

No plain Hallmark card here. Fabulous poetics throughout to make that special someone blush. You've outdone yourself once again Michele.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 02/18/05 at 12:48 AM

wowow! is right...this poem is excellentt

Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/18/05 at 05:53 PM

I sat here softly smiling. rolling the words around in my mouth and off the tip of my tongue... WOW... Great Poem!

Posted by Richard Trotter on 03/03/05 at 10:12 PM

very beautiful poem and sentiments :)

Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/07/08 at 03:27 PM

Congrats on POTD!

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