| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/31/05 at 12:46 PM Caffeinated kisses make for frenetic foreplay, too bad their passion drowned in the blue light of television. Great read! :) |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 02/01/05 at 06:07 PM Delicious. Like music. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/01/05 at 06:59 PM mmm.. this is a yummy poem! its going to my favorites file !!! :) |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 02/03/05 at 02:34 PM Very nice and well written. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/04/05 at 12:38 AM Well done...Charlie |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/07/05 at 07:21 PM I seem to recall being in a room like that myself a time or two....beautiful bittersweet evocation |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/09/10 at 07:23 PM Love the feel of this...kinda ominous yet comforting some how....congrats on potd....thanks. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/09/10 at 10:46 PM Awesome POTD Mel, congrats! :) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/10/10 at 12:54 AM this piece brings me back. fantastic! |
| Posted by Kimberly Bowen on 03/10/10 at 04:47 AM this really is just a beautiful poem. so beautiful. congrats on potd. :) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/11/10 at 03:38 PM Enjoyed this very much. Congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/15/10 at 12:26 AM this is a great piece, deserving of it's spot on the top-rated list...kudos poet, one thing you cannot lament, it the success of this poem, it is a sure thing! peace, jewels |
