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by Lori I Wolfe

I am at the cross roads
of my internal revenues
now is the time to weigh the profits 
of my insignificant funds
my pecuniary resource failure
I stand now at hollow grounds of interment
the turning point of new commencements
a vacancy of space must be cleared
for new impresssions to emboss the rocks
as I leave behind the remnants of nothing 
into the passageways of opportunity
building forward with sculpting clay 
to become my own masterpiece of life 

01/26/2005

Posted on 01/26/2005
Copyright © 2025 Lori I Wolfe

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/27/05 at 02:45 PM

Confidence/determination one can bank on. Well stated Lori!

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/27/05 at 10:19 PM

Such great wordplay in this Lori and an excellent enlightened exposure. Superb!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/20/05 at 03:42 PM

you have a great passion for words and it shows, as you place each, delicately and not haphazard to wonderful effect.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/20/05 at 06:24 PM

...lori, don't wanna be trite, but all that chris, et al. said, and i love the metaphorical lilt that this thing possesses...it is like Medussa, many-headed...each line is rife with double-entrendres and like the othes, you gotta way with words, gal...peace, chaz

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