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by Lori I WolfeI am at the cross roads of my internal revenues now is the time to weigh the profits of my insignificant funds my pecuniary resource failure I stand now at hollow grounds of interment the turning point of new commencements a vacancy of space must be cleared for new impresssions to emboss the rocks as I leave behind the remnants of nothing into the passageways of opportunity building forward with sculpting clay to become my own masterpiece of life 01/26/2005 Posted on 01/26/2005
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| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/27/05 at 02:45 PM Confidence/determination one can bank on. Well stated Lori! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/27/05 at 10:19 PM Such great wordplay in this Lori and an excellent enlightened exposure. Superb! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/20/05 at 03:42 PM you have a great passion for words and it shows, as you place each, delicately and not haphazard to wonderful effect. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/20/05 at 06:24 PM ...lori, don't wanna be trite, but all that chris, et al. said, and i love the metaphorical lilt that this thing possesses...it is like Medussa, many-headed...each line is rife with double-entrendres and like the othes, you gotta way with words, gal...peace, chaz |
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