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GREEN (haiku)

Plump chubby fingers
Examining a snow pea
Squooshed into green paint

01/20/2005

Author's Note: Jacob loves peas.. eating them and smashing them!

Posted on 01/25/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/25/05 at 05:40 PM

Wonderful descriptiveness Melissa! Easy to visualize.

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 01/29/05 at 01:04 PM

make sure he doesn't eat any of it after mixing it with paint. not healthy! ohhh, it was a metaphor. my bad! how cutie.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/30/05 at 02:20 PM

What a little sweet pea!

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