| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/18/05 at 02:31 PM 'Now real, within grasp'...despite the question, this feeling of belonging is so real, how ever subjective is the experience, its a beautiful emotion.
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| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/19/05 at 05:28 AM my goodness this is great "An iris to ecstasy only imagined before"...what a great line...i love this
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| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/19/05 at 12:50 PM words well chosen from the shards which lay before us shattered, to gather up and dance and dance this does its unfailing ditty, to ask, are you real? as real as the wind is real only when it stirs. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/19/05 at 03:03 PM Thought provoking, emotionally stimulating. I especially like these lines: You know, forever means forever Can you make that promise?
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| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/19/05 at 09:13 PM Very well done Mich! I can't pick out one or two lines I like better, I like them all...Charlie |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/19/05 at 10:47 PM Loved the way you broke out the "please" separately - it added so much pleading and desire to both the preceding line and the following one. And of course, the "iris to ecstasy" I concur is a wonderful line. And the question itself - are you really asking it?... [;0)~ |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/20/05 at 12:59 AM If you imagine reality, does it make it any less real? Standing on the precipice between dream and wake, I catch your words and hold them near my heart. Incredible imagery. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/20/05 at 10:09 AM Congratulations on POTD, Michele. The surreal, dreamlike urgency is so strongly felt when reading this piece. So very excellent. |
| Posted by Mark Maxey on 01/20/05 at 12:26 PM wonderfully constructed poem...nicely done... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/20/05 at 02:47 PM A pleasant surprise when I opened PPS this morning. Congrats on POTD Michele! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/20/05 at 06:20 PM There is definitely a fine line dividing both sides to our perception of reality, and you have defended yours with epicurean style. Grrrrrrr! I like the assertiveness of this piece, Michele.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/20/05 at 06:22 PM Post Script; Congratulations on becoming The Pagan Poet Of The Day.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/21/05 at 02:29 AM Congratulations for poem of the day Mich...Charlie |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/21/05 at 05:40 AM Michele, CONGRATULATIONS on POTD! I, too, loved the line, "an iris to ecstacy..." |
| Posted by Angela Stevens on 07/11/11 at 06:31 PM I agree that 'An iris to ecstasy only imagined before' is a great line. Nice work. |
