[Haiku] Murder at the barbershop
by Rommel Cruz
Lifeless petal breaths of hair
Sprawls the grieving floor
Author's Note: my 3rd haiku
Posted on 01/07/2005
Copyright © 2020 Rommel Cruz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/10/05 at 02:42 PM|
Such strong imagery in so few words!
|Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/10/05 at 06:38 PM|
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 12:45 AM|
We cut off in youth; what we spend thousands on in old age. Not thinning, yet. But I've been having nightmares. Great read and symbolism.
|Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 01/31/05 at 06:58 PM|
sorry, can't help it. the whole contrast between the serious imagery and the actual fact tickles my funny bone.
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/09/05 at 10:48 PM|
I don't wanna go get my haircut anymore :(