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[Haiku] Murder at the barbershop
by Rommel CruzTriumphant scissors
Lifeless petal breaths of hair
Sprawls the grieving floor 01/07/2005 Author's Note: my 3rd haiku
Posted on 01/07/2005
Copyright © 2024 Rommel Cruz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/10/05 at 02:42 PM Such strong imagery in so few words! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/10/05 at 06:38 PM perfect! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 12:45 AM We cut off in youth; what we spend thousands on in old age. Not thinning, yet. But I've been having nightmares. Great read and symbolism. |
| Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 01/31/05 at 06:58 PM *SNICKER*
sorry, can't help it. the whole contrast between the serious imagery and the actual fact tickles my funny bone. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/09/05 at 10:48 PM I don't wanna go get my haircut anymore :( |
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