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[Haiku] Murder at the barbershop

by Rommel Cruz

Triumphant scissors
Lifeless petal breaths of hair
Sprawls the grieving floor

01/07/2005

Author's Note: my 3rd haiku

Posted on 01/07/2005
Copyright © 2020 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/10/05 at 02:42 PM

Such strong imagery in so few words!

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/10/05 at 06:38 PM

perfect!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 12:45 AM

We cut off in youth; what we spend thousands on in old age. Not thinning, yet. But I've been having nightmares. Great read and symbolism.

Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 01/31/05 at 06:58 PM

*SNICKER* sorry, can't help it. the whole contrast between the serious imagery and the actual fact tickles my funny bone.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/09/05 at 10:48 PM

I don't wanna go get my haircut anymore :(

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