| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 12/18/04 at 11:55 AM Wow Charlie! This is exactly how the world felt to me this day that you wrote it...too much...too much...Great deep insightful piece! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/18/04 at 12:28 PM Quite different from your usual jocularity! But as M.E. wrote, quite insightful. Reminds me a bit of "O Little Town of Bethlehem" in its theme. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/19/04 at 04:18 AM Refreshing moral departure for you Charles. So much sin, so true, and yet I'd like to think so much good as well judging by the intermittent white clouds. Thought provoking read to be sure. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/19/04 at 05:11 AM The mood is so distinct.External affecting within.I do identify with this. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/19/04 at 08:24 PM Wonderful insightful change-of-pace. Something I think about a lot, being the imperfect human being that I am. Thank you, Charlie.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 12/20/04 at 10:41 PM Interesting adaptation...I like to ponder on such ideas, but your poem, especially repeating at the end, emphasizes the mirror effect on a global and human scale...well done |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 12/22/04 at 01:10 AM This is excellent work, Charlie.. I'm really quite proud of this piece :) Nothing wrong with being serious! Love it.. |
