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At Mass
by Uriel TovarBroken light, filtered through cold
blue, red, green and gold
Christ splintered on granite floors. 12/03/2004 Author's Note: i know haiku is 5/7/5 but since japanese is a syllabic language and english isn't variations can be made to the form at times.
Posted on 12/04/2004
Copyright © 2024 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 12/13/04 at 02:17 PM Powerful poem! You really captured the words to display such profound imagery. Loved it :) |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 12/15/04 at 08:43 PM Very lovely. I love stained glass so the imagery is very pleasing to me. Calm and stoic, with spirituality added. Very nice. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/22/05 at 11:44 PM I like this...easy to visualize...sunlight filtered through stained glass. Well done. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/07/05 at 08:49 AM This is great I love the last line. |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 03/11/11 at 05:44 AM Yes, a great visual--I can feel what we see. |
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