| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/08/04 at 06:30 AM Oh, yes, by all means, let's. "make our spines a violin": absolutely gorgeous. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 11/08/04 at 03:17 PM Very refreshing! |
| Posted by Mahassine Mir on 11/12/04 at 09:10 AM "to make our spines a violin" is really really great imagery. The rythm flows very nicely. Bravo ! |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 11/15/04 at 11:42 PM imagery was just superb in this piece, "painting smiles on the dead" and "make our spines a volin" were my favs. Stay beautiful xoxox |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 03/20/06 at 10:05 PM oooh.. that is excellent. gave me the warm fuzzies. congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Nicole Assenza on 03/21/06 at 12:21 AM I love this! <3 Also, it is interesting to note that I too have written a poem involving a spine as a musical instrument. But anyways, this definately deserved to be Poem of the Day. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/22/06 at 02:45 AM Most excellent! Not a wasted word - "Lets" is such a great word for potential and possibilities. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 03/23/06 at 08:02 AM ah yes, the paradox. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/24/06 at 04:49 PM Sheer JOY of a poem! Sheer JOY of creativity!
I look forward to more of you! |
| Posted by Quinn Vokes on 10/16/11 at 12:47 AM I missed this at the time... but now I see it is one of my favorites, almost a dream from long ago. Absolutely superb :) Congrats on POTD. |
