|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/08/04 at 06:30 AM|
Oh, yes, by all means, let's. "make our spines a violin": absolutely gorgeous.
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 11/08/04 at 03:17 PM|
|Posted by Mahassine Mir on 11/12/04 at 09:10 AM|
"to make our spines a violin" is really really great imagery. The rythm flows very nicely. Bravo !
|Posted by Sam Roberts on 11/15/04 at 11:42 PM|
imagery was just superb in this piece, "painting smiles on the dead" and "make our spines a volin" were my favs. Stay beautiful xoxox
|Posted by Lauren Singer on 03/20/06 at 10:05 PM|
oooh.. that is excellent. gave me the warm fuzzies. congrats on POTD!
|Posted by Nicole Assenza on 03/21/06 at 12:21 AM|
I love this! <3 Also, it is interesting to note that I too have written a poem involving a spine as a musical instrument. But anyways, this definately deserved to be Poem of the Day.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/22/06 at 02:45 AM|
Most excellent! Not a wasted word - "Lets" is such a great word for potential and possibilities.
|Posted by H.M Stevens on 03/23/06 at 08:02 AM|
ah yes, the paradox.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/24/06 at 04:49 PM|
Sheer JOY of a poem! Sheer JOY of creativity!
I look forward to more of you!
|Posted by Quinn Vokes on 10/16/11 at 12:47 AM|
I missed this at the time... but now I see it is one of my favorites, almost a dream from long ago. Absolutely superb :) Congrats on POTD.