Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/08/04 at 02:04 AM Those first years after leaving that darkness well-expressed in this poem, Chris. Your muse has been faithful for all these years through suffering, death, and resurrection. How fortunate you and we are. |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 11/08/04 at 03:42 AM the turning from temptation and troubled habits and away from the Devil, to the Angelic, or Deity, is always a positive message. Superbly done. |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/08/04 at 07:27 PM *chuckles.* niice. i'll definitely add more later after i've finished chewing on its flesh. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/10/04 at 12:37 AM Breaking from a gang is extremely difficult.... this has a 'West Side Story' feel to it that brings an important message to a broad audience. Great read. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/10/04 at 01:12 PM Significant, positive, powerful message! This should be on every high school class bulletin board I think! (That should be all right since it doesn't directly refer to God -- just the Devil! *)) |
Posted by Don Coffman on 11/11/04 at 02:20 AM A great comeback from the dark side, with a good dash of hope and optimism that pushes the poem along. I can hear a classic rock song somewhere in there, too. Excellent reading. :) |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/11/04 at 07:19 PM when i saw this title i knew this was gonna be great. i love this work the repition works well...i really admire this work and strength of it. |
Posted by Mo Couts on 06/24/11 at 02:45 AM These words are strong, meaningful, and powerful. Much like the one who wrote them =) |