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Imprints
by Alicia VannEven gentle steps
in sand leave an imprint.
Sometimes a wave
washes the evidence
away, or a more
significant
imprint is made
that renders yours
invisible.
There is not
enough commotion
born to sand alone
that could make a
difference for it is so
delicate that the wind
can make it dance. 11/05/2004 Posted on 11/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Alicia Vann
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 11/06/04 at 05:21 AM Alicia, this poem flows so smoothly and gracefully. "delicate that the wind
can make it dance." <----- my two favorite lines. Imprints is thoughtfully entwined with more than vivid imagery ... it has a double edge and a writer's finesse. This one's going in my favorites. ~~ Kyle Anne
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| Posted by Ann Krischus on 09/24/06 at 01:59 PM beautiful ... it leaves me speechless. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/25/06 at 03:31 AM Thought provoking piece Alicia; nicely extends to humanity...life itself. Congrats on POTD! |
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