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Rouse The Love Again

by Kate Demeree

Darling,
These are but dreams
Misty wanderings
Where we love
Hot and hungrily
Exhausted lay
Sleeping touch,
Feather kisses
Searing chilled skin

Rouse the love again

Reality a cold spot
With pale brazen fingers
Scraping away the night
Slicing pieces of you


Let me view unreality
Here in misty dream
Rouse me not so cuttingly
To my own tormented
Scream


10/16/2004

Author's Note: Thank you Mistro.....

Posted on 10/16/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/16/04 at 01:30 PM

Circe, that supposed songstress never chimed a better song. Pity or envy the potential Odessyus, whom is bequeat this song.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/16/04 at 05:22 PM

Words read in the foggy haze of passion's breath. Beautifully written.... :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/16/04 at 08:14 PM

Lovely, romantic, but to a degree also quite haunting in its longing. Glad I got to read this Kate. Kudos!

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/19/04 at 08:14 PM

the contrast between the dreams of and the reality that is makes the poem, gives it its bite, its power...but I seem to have told you that before..:)

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/08/05 at 09:43 AM

Amazing work Kate! Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/08/05 at 01:48 PM

mistro deserves a standing ovation... wrought with imagery... i love this piece... blessings and congrats...

Posted by JD Clay on 02/08/05 at 02:52 PM

This luxuriant tale brims the page with passion and pulsation, Kate. Congratulations on it's pathetic climax here atop the charts. Pe4ce...

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/08/05 at 02:57 PM

congratulations Kate and much deserving. this poem flows better than waters though the unspoiled gutters of heaven on a good day.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/08/05 at 07:39 PM

Congratulations on poem of the day Katie. Well done.....Charlie

Posted by David R Spellman on 02/08/05 at 10:34 PM

I apparently missed the posting of this so I am so glad to see it here as POTD. An excellent choice - both the poem and the author. Congrats Kate!!! [;0)~

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