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haiku (October's bite)

by David R Spellman

 
October's bite –
jack-o-lantern's
decaying tooth
 
 
 

10/08/2004

Posted on 10/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/13/04 at 02:32 AM

Clever! Humorous. October in a nutshell!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/13/04 at 03:21 PM

Yes, october bite. I just have to imagine. hahaha

Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 10/13/04 at 04:42 PM

decaying sweet-tooth... yum

Posted by Christina Bruno on 10/14/04 at 05:13 AM

i broke into the halloween candy today actually lol :)

Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/15/04 at 07:42 PM

Childhood memories are flooding back to me now! Great haiku :)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/16/04 at 05:37 PM

You catch the feel of autumn exceptionally well in this piece... well done!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/17/04 at 09:49 PM

Brought a smile to my face, and a flash back to that Charlie Brown cartoon, about the Great Pumpkin. :o)

Posted by Sarah Graves on 10/22/04 at 12:49 AM

Well, this just got me ready for the fall season! Thank you :)

Posted by Paul Marino on 02/26/05 at 07:14 PM

oooh, very good play on words.

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