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by Melissa Arel



organized attempt
restricts His glorious move
its God in a box


07/25/2004

Author's Note: some of you may not agree with me on this, but that\'s ok.. :)

Posted on 07/28/2004
Copyright © 2026 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 07/28/04 at 10:06 PM

Ooooh!!!! I LOVE it! A+++ from this reader! Nice job!

Posted by Keith D Allison on 07/31/04 at 04:00 PM

like this, It reminds me that there's more in life walked each moment in remembrance of wine and broken bread.

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/06/04 at 12:45 PM

Boldly stated and well done!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/08/15 at 08:24 PM

Clever and thought provoking. Congrats on POTD!

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