by Melissa Arel

organized attempt
restricts His glorious move
its God in a box


Author's Note: some of you may not agree with me on this, but that's ok.. :)

Posted on 07/28/2004
Copyright © 2020 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 07/28/04 at 10:06 PM

Ooooh!!!! I LOVE it! A+++ from this reader! Nice job!

Posted by Keith D Allison on 07/31/04 at 04:00 PM

like this, It reminds me that there's more in life walked each moment in remembrance of wine and broken bread.

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/06/04 at 12:45 PM

Boldly stated and well done!

Posted by Robin Patterson on 12/30/05 at 09:35 PM

Melissa-this made me think on such a deep level...of how confining we can be to each other when we unpretentiously allow organization the top seat over the sovereign orchestration of God's glory. This will go in my fav's;)

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/08/15 at 08:24 PM

Clever and thought provoking. Congrats on POTD!

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