| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/21/04 at 12:15 AM and the man... (yes, he is but a man, no matter how he may seem *grin*)... can create... with pictures... i could stare at this for hours... as you can see... blessings... |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 07/21/04 at 03:45 AM Testing Testing... |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 07/21/04 at 03:48 AM Oh what fun, a page seen and unseen! hahaha But this is brilliant, all eyes on all eyes, some focused on the whole scene, some comprehending only the home base...brilliant...I love it! :-) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/22/04 at 03:32 AM I see but I don't believe what I see.
To see is to be, at least for me....Charlie
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/22/04 at 04:59 PM Trippy picture poem Ashok. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/22/04 at 05:38 PM This is amazing. I like how you separated the two, and how what you DON'T see can lead to all kinds of forms if an imagination chooses to go there. The beginning and end are in the same area, and this you See... but the path that is taken through the non-seeing CAN'T be seen, for whatever reason.
I've found it interesting that we have focused on what is SEEN here... when as much, if not more, is UNSEEN. Yet, Ashok, when viewed this way, objectively, we can KNOW. It doesn't have to be SEEN.
I can think of many lines that could be the deliniation, too. There is much to be thought of and about while viewing and contemplating this work. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 07/23/04 at 06:26 PM You are the only person I know who can be this philosophical with such few words. It must be talent. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/24/04 at 02:26 PM It takes so many eyes to confirm that we are blind. Suberb. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/24/04 at 04:36 PM I see my nonseeing, nonseeing my seeing and ne'er the nonseeing, seeing twain shall meet but the seeing see that it sees not so much as it presumes and the nonseeing not notseeing so much as it presumes. |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 07/26/04 at 04:38 PM You never cease to amaze me. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 07/29/04 at 11:00 PM Is this one of your drawings? |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/26/04 at 02:10 AM One sees that which he chooses! This illustrated poem stirs the imagination. Each will see in it what his experience and background bring to it. Add knowledge and a bit of wisdom to it and it can speak volumes. For me the nonseeing is the limitations placed by culture, time, learning, personal viewpoint. |
