| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 06/12/04 at 03:00 PM a welcome find today, Vimal. Good to see your work again, as always, very touching,. |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 06/12/04 at 09:36 PM "as the rain falls like
watery beads threaded by
heaven" Gorgeous. This is heartfelt and so beautiful. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/13/04 at 04:34 AM lovely imagery used here vimal. Yes, this is a heartfelt poem. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/21/04 at 12:34 PM Your poem is that salty tear spilled into your mouth awakening your soul and transformed for us to read and love. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/28/04 at 09:14 PM Vimal, this is so beautiful and sad at the same time. Memories are such a mixture of emotion --it is good to see you capture that aspect of them. Great read. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/01/04 at 12:50 PM I really enjoy poems that use water imagery, and this is no exception. Worthy analogy Vimal. |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 08/05/04 at 04:28 PM Thanks for sharing this beautiful and emotional poem. You've given the reader a tremendous sense of "feel" with great use of imagery. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/14/05 at 06:13 PM this is so beautifully sad... i can almost feel the raindrops sheeting off a broken heart... excellent work... blessings... |
