|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/25/04 at 04:38 PM|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/04 at 05:22 PM|
Quite effective! I envision a cafe in Paris.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/26/04 at 06:28 AM|
i can see and feel these... perfect, maureen... blessings...
|Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/26/04 at 02:36 PM|
very lovely haiku...it awakens many senses...quite effective
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/26/04 at 04:23 PM|
wonderful haiku. So easily to place this scene really anywhere.
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/26/04 at 05:49 PM|
interesting use of 'silhouette' as a verb. a tranquil scene... full of promise
|Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 07:34 PM|
A very warm and peaceful scene you treat us to with this. Very nice Maureen!
|Posted by H.M Stevens on 05/27/04 at 01:06 AM|
You just painted with your words- amazing...perhaps it was using silhouette as a verb...
|Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 05/28/04 at 12:26 AM|
Startling in its simplicity - vivid as an afterimage - bravo! d:-)
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/28/04 at 12:46 PM|
This is the most vivid haiku I've ever written, it leaves you wanting more. Nice!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/30/04 at 11:45 AM|
Rich in imagery and connotation!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/01/04 at 04:11 PM|
Hey, I see I'm not the only one doing well today...congrats on POTD!
|Posted by David R Spellman on 06/01/04 at 06:13 PM|
Nice to see this as POTD - congrats Maureen!
|Posted by Stephanie Kent on 06/02/04 at 02:31 AM|
This is simply beautiful! Congratulations:)
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/29/04 at 04:13 AM|
I hear an evening flute and a fountain laced with ivy, and in that silhouette a memory of a moment's love... lovely, Maureen. Congrats on potd.