| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/25/04 at 04:38 PM lovely haiku. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/04 at 05:22 PM Quite effective! I envision a cafe in Paris. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/26/04 at 06:28 AM i can see and feel these... perfect, maureen... blessings... |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/26/04 at 02:36 PM very lovely haiku...it awakens many senses...quite effective |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/26/04 at 04:23 PM wonderful haiku. So easily to place this scene really anywhere. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/26/04 at 05:49 PM interesting use of 'silhouette' as a verb. a tranquil scene... full of promise |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 07:34 PM A very warm and peaceful scene you treat us to with this. Very nice Maureen! |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 05/27/04 at 01:06 AM You just painted with your words- amazing...perhaps it was using silhouette as a verb... |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 05/28/04 at 12:26 AM Startling in its simplicity - vivid as an afterimage - bravo! d:-) |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/28/04 at 12:46 PM This is the most vivid haiku I've ever written, it leaves you wanting more. Nice! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/30/04 at 11:45 AM Rich in imagery and connotation! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/01/04 at 04:11 PM Hey, I see I'm not the only one doing well today...congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 06/01/04 at 06:13 PM Nice to see this as POTD - congrats Maureen! |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 06/02/04 at 02:31 AM This is simply beautiful! Congratulations:) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/29/04 at 04:13 AM I hear an evening flute and a fountain laced with ivy, and in that silhouette a memory of a moment's love... lovely, Maureen. Congrats on potd. |
