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Evening Haiku

by Maureen Glaude

cafe at dusk
a vase of roses
silhouette on the wall

05/25/2004

Posted on 05/25/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/25/04 at 04:38 PM

lovely haiku.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/04 at 05:22 PM

Quite effective! I envision a cafe in Paris.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/26/04 at 06:28 AM

i can see and feel these... perfect, maureen... blessings...

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/26/04 at 02:36 PM

very lovely haiku...it awakens many senses...quite effective

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/26/04 at 04:23 PM

wonderful haiku. So easily to place this scene really anywhere.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/26/04 at 05:49 PM

interesting use of 'silhouette' as a verb. a tranquil scene... full of promise

Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 07:34 PM

A very warm and peaceful scene you treat us to with this. Very nice Maureen!

Posted by H.M Stevens on 05/27/04 at 01:06 AM

You just painted with your words- amazing...perhaps it was using silhouette as a verb...

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 05/28/04 at 12:26 AM

Startling in its simplicity - vivid as an afterimage - bravo! d:-)

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/28/04 at 12:46 PM

This is the most vivid haiku I've ever written, it leaves you wanting more. Nice!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/30/04 at 11:45 AM

Rich in imagery and connotation!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/01/04 at 04:11 PM

Hey, I see I'm not the only one doing well today...congrats on POTD!

Posted by David R Spellman on 06/01/04 at 06:13 PM

Nice to see this as POTD - congrats Maureen!

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 06/02/04 at 02:31 AM

This is simply beautiful! Congratulations:)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/29/04 at 04:13 AM

I hear an evening flute and a fountain laced with ivy, and in that silhouette a memory of a moment's love... lovely, Maureen. Congrats on potd.

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