| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/13/04 at 02:17 PM ahahahaha... this is so wonderful!!!... let your imagination run wild and free... wow, i'll never think of the produce aisle quite the same again... excellent piece... blessings... |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 05/13/04 at 02:58 PM Ah, this is wicked and cute. What a combination. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/13/04 at 04:04 PM Oh wow, this is so good! The plays on words so juicy...how delightfully naughty! Bravo!! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/13/04 at 05:03 PM YEOWZA! Nothing more needs be said. Stupendous jadi!!! |
| Posted by Jane E Pearce on 05/13/04 at 07:01 PM JD, this is delightful!!! What a fine writer you are!! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/13/04 at 08:02 PM that's it...now i know why I need cooking lessons.
What a delicious treat this poem is! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/13/04 at 08:44 PM Evoking memories of a scene from the movie "Animal House" you've managed quite a tasteful and sensual scene with this one. Quite amusing and delightful. An excellent piece...! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/14/04 at 04:44 PM Yes, subtle but suggestively subtle. |
| Posted by Jon-Jacob F Deal on 05/14/04 at 10:16 PM Haha, it's awesome.
JJ |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 05/14/04 at 10:49 PM thanks for the laugh. A perfect word painting. |
| Posted by Amy Niggel on 05/15/04 at 01:58 PM Heh I like it, its very refreshing. Good job :) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/16/04 at 02:41 AM Funtasticly wild Jadi...Charlie |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/16/04 at 11:41 AM one could imagine how hard to ring up such amorous and risque articles at the register and how to bag such, a most difficult endeavour. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 05/16/04 at 06:51 PM oh, how refreshing! you have put the cliche legend on the pedestal of poetic perspective!! you had me at zucchini!! ...if you're ever in san francisco, there is a famous pick up joint -- the produce aisle in the Marina district Safeway! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/17/04 at 12:11 AM simply perfection...you've said so much in so few words...it makes me feel this poem...and that's exactly what i need right now... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/20/04 at 10:14 PM Playful, tasteful, and downright tasty. Great use of language and produce to take innuendo to new heights. |
| Posted by Patricia J Reed on 06/25/04 at 05:16 AM i love the supermarket!! this one is great
-patti |
| Posted by Robert Cameron Hazelton on 07/28/04 at 11:11 AM Hey JD, how is it? I really enjoyed this little sensual adventure. Quite provocative! |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 02/23/07 at 10:08 PM I disagree with TA Jennings that it would be more effective without the last stanza. I think the last stanza is the last subtle ambiguity and clarifies the silent instant secret and perhaps intuitive intimacy. Delicioso! Heartsta, Siri |
