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My Ducky Duck Duck

by Kalikala Smith

**inspired by Charles E Minshall***

My ducky duck is a yellow duck
and he likes to duck with the other ducks
in the small, cool pool after a day at school
when the trees have bees and the honey is amuck.

Oh what to do with my ducky duck duck
when he sits in that pond without any luck
in the small, cool pool after a day at school
and he makes one good friend who goes by Chuck.

I know what he'd say, oh my ducky duck duck
if he knew that I worried about his getting stuck
in the small, cool pool after a day at school
he'd say, "relax and smile and I'll make you a buck."

So that's what you do with a ducky duck duck
when you know that he's yellow and doesn't have much luck
in a small, cool pool after a day at school
you stick him in the mucky muck muck.

04/19/2004

Author's Note: yes, i'm hyper. and yes, it doesn't make much sense. but it's not supposed to... or something;) :)

Posted on 04/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/20/04 at 12:33 AM

I will have no truck with a duck who has a friend named Chuck, he might bring bad luck..~(8^D)=( Funtastic Kali.....Charlie

Posted by Anne Howe on 04/21/04 at 03:44 AM

a cool ducky duck duck poem :)

Posted by Matt Forget on 04/22/04 at 03:48 AM

The best! I love it...I'm featuring it as a spring poem because it's so cute! Hehe...I love it...It's a favorite of mine for sure!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/24/04 at 03:01 PM

Cute! Thanks for the Saturday smile!!

Posted by Ernest A Miller on 05/06/04 at 03:30 AM

With a name like ernie this piece touchs my heart ;) nice job

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 08/26/05 at 04:46 PM

Quack!!!!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/18/07 at 02:17 PM

Congratulations on poem of the day Kali...Charlie

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/18/07 at 10:05 PM

This reminds me of a short story for pre-school kids. Congratulations on your POTD.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/20/07 at 12:26 AM

Well done!!! Congrats on POTD!!! Very well deserved!!!

Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/18/09 at 01:10 PM

A fun poem. I wish the best for your ducky duck duck and hope with some luck he'll get out of the mucky muck muck. Thanks for the chuck le.:-)

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