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Crazy Love

by Adrian Calhoun

Tonight I flew to the stars and back,
I did a rimshot off the moon,
and bounced off the ozone layer a time or two.

Have no idea why i'm so high,
my heads in the clouds,
my feet walking the air.
I feel like a helium balloon.

Must be something in the spring,
maybe it has something to do with you.
My heart flutters,
my knees get weak.
I'm like a little schoolboy inside.

Man what a trip,
but i'm enjoying the ride.

04/15/2004

Posted on 04/16/2004
Copyright © 2024 Adrian Calhoun

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/16/04 at 05:56 AM

sounds like an E ticket....(use to be the best ticket ride at Disneyland) Nice picture too!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/04 at 01:20 PM

Ain't it wonderful! Crazy Love! Keep that romance goin! Great expression of romantic love!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/04 at 04:45 PM

Excellent! Crazy fun indeed. I must add this to my list of favorites!!

Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 04/16/04 at 10:07 PM

Hey buddy, when your knees finaly buckle and you fall to the ground remember I'm off duty permanently , that means no CPR! How long does this ride last? I don't want it to stop yet. Mybe we need to buy a few more tickets. You musta' been crazy in love when you wrote this. Great read with wonderful imagery and effects! Another favorite.

Posted by Lori Johnson on 04/19/04 at 06:06 PM

Oh so sweet! *sniffle*sniffle* ;)

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