Crazy Love by Adrian CalhounTonight I flew to the stars and back,
I did a rimshot off the moon,
and bounced off the ozone layer a time or two.
Have no idea why i'm so high,
my heads in the clouds,
my feet walking the air.
I feel like a helium balloon.
Must be something in the spring,
maybe it has something to do with you.
My heart flutters,
my knees get weak.
I'm like a little schoolboy inside.
Man what a trip,
but i'm enjoying the ride. 04/15/2004 Posted on 04/16/2004 Copyright © 2024 Adrian Calhoun
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/16/04 at 05:56 AM sounds like an E ticket....(use to be the best ticket ride at Disneyland) Nice picture too! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/04 at 01:20 PM Ain't it wonderful! Crazy Love! Keep that romance goin! Great expression of romantic love! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/04 at 04:45 PM Excellent! Crazy fun indeed. I must add this to my list of favorites!! |
Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 04/16/04 at 10:07 PM Hey buddy, when your knees finaly buckle and you fall to the ground remember I'm off duty permanently , that means no CPR! How long does this ride last? I don't want it to stop yet. Mybe we need to buy a few more tickets. You musta' been crazy in love when you wrote this. Great read with wonderful imagery and effects! Another favorite. |
Posted by Lori Johnson on 04/19/04 at 06:06 PM Oh so sweet! *sniffle*sniffle*
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