| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/14/04 at 06:20 PM Really like the descriptiveness of this; sounds pretty accurate! :o) |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/14/04 at 06:58 PM under today's stresses, we can all wonder at times if we'll fall over that edge. Important message. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/22/08 at 12:47 PM madeline, congrats on POTD. i like what you've done with this form...haikus are always fun. however, i think with this kind of subject matter, trying to condense it into 17 syllables is too limiting. this is a big topic. maybe you should try fleshing this out in a form with more wiggle room? thanks for sharing your work! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 07/22/08 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on POTD!
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/22/08 at 03:06 PM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 07/22/08 at 04:15 PM I like how you took something so chaotic and instead of ranting simply put said this is it. Great...I like it alot. Congrats on POTD smh |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/23/08 at 02:55 AM Congratulations on POTD. Oh yes...I can relate. |
