| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/08/04 at 03:40 PM Ooh the form is excellent! I say this not because I know anything about form but because I actually felt like I was zooming on that bicycle myself! Nice effect Chris...I really enjoyed this one...very fun and spirited and made me smile in response to my resulting nostalgic day dreams...lovely expression of a youthful heart and the momentary recapture of boyhood adventure. :-) |
| Posted by Christopher Shin on 04/08/04 at 04:26 PM Reminds me of my youth of how I tried to skateboard and show my sister how to. Of course not like riding a bike. Thank you for the poem. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/08/04 at 04:28 PM you show 'em, Chris! riding a bicycle, you can always take it up again. and jumps too!
ah, spring. hula hoops and all. Great fun poem, full of spirit and being young at heart. I remember another bike one you had about jumps, I think, a different one with only you in it? |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 04/08/04 at 06:11 PM Yes this is quite a flashback to childhood memories of wrecking myself off of homemade jumps :) This is wonderful Chris, great concept and great language. |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 04/09/04 at 11:45 AM oh, the good old days. i enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/10/04 at 10:02 PM from my angle, bicycles are where it's at. Long live youth and bicycling and long live your poem. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/11/04 at 01:15 PM 'kids riding in visitor parking' in the D3, you flew on the 4th. 4th dimension, I mean. We all do.Or was it in the 5th? hahahaha. |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/12/04 at 01:25 AM I do believe you got the wind in all of our hair! Great ride! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/13/04 at 02:02 AM Great fun! Reliving childhood fantasy! Never get too old to think young! :) |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/06/06 at 10:36 AM Imagery supreme, rode so hard my legs hurt and I dream I seen E.T.. Bravo! |
