| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/04/04 at 11:13 PM gorgeous. Many years ago, my first boyfriend and I considered the song United We Stand, Divided We Fall, our song. Nice to see it's remembered. |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 04/05/04 at 05:48 PM Excellent haiku. Packed with thought. :) |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/05/04 at 10:22 PM Oh MY...this is beautiful! I'm so happy to find your words!!! |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/06/04 at 01:09 AM Excellent Haiku, could be interpreted in other ways as well. :-) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/06/04 at 02:19 PM Realities are paradoxical. Its not the unity which brings unity but the depths which bring in all the scattered pieces together in oneness, within as well as without. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/06/04 at 06:10 PM And a rolling stone gathers no moss. Sorry, I couldn't resist that. Evocative read; definite haiku impact Rula. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/06/04 at 07:53 PM Your Haiku is one I really like Rula...Charlie |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/08/04 at 01:53 AM oh, oh rula i LOVE it...it's uniquely beautiful... |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/08/04 at 08:44 AM with tears, all pain can wash away... this is what is see in this little bit of hope... beautiful... blessings... |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/08/04 at 08:53 PM so pretty |
