|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/05/04 at 12:34 AM|
I don't know where your river is, but it sounds awesome like mine (the Columbia River). I love the water, and I love the idea of my empty shell returning to it one day. Excellent imagery! I'm glad I found you.
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/08/04 at 03:01 AM|
'Flowing on forever
My river and me' This is beautiful. This feeling of oneness , with your life, within, without.
|Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/09/04 at 04:19 AM|
This would be a really wonderful song...as it is a poem...
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/19/04 at 11:37 AM|
this is a soul and heartprobe piece of writing, Thomas, and like that traveler along its flanks, I am mesmered in its reflection.
|Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 04/21/04 at 11:25 AM|
This is simply Awesome! You nailed a great rhythm with this piece and it really does flow like a river! Wonderful read!
|Posted by Lori Johnson on 06/16/04 at 05:50 PM|
Beautiful, reminds me of the movie Big Fish. Well done. :)