Sap (haiku)

by Glenn Currier

Sap thunders up trunk
cued by spring crashes through bark
feathery greenlets.


Posted on 03/31/2004
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/31/04 at 05:23 PM

Spring sounds like an association, associated by which the sap, the healing factor,the feathery greenlets thunders up, crashing through bark. The healing factor sounds like a life force.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/04 at 11:40 PM

Nature and haiku at their best indeed sir. Kudos!

Posted by JD Clay on 04/03/04 at 02:31 PM

Metamorphic poetry, Glenn. If you listen closely you can actually hear them grow. This one flourishes the forest of the mind. Pe4ce...

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/16/04 at 03:46 PM

"sap thunders" wow, nice image, very unique

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