spring weeds (senryu)

by Glenn Currier

weeds sprout around
like pieces of loneliness
rooted in my days


Posted on 03/17/2004
Copyright © 2023 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/17/04 at 07:08 PM

Visually quite effective Mr. Currier. :)

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/18/04 at 11:44 PM

lovely analogy...

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 03/18/04 at 11:50 PM

this is very deep.....excellent

Posted by JD Clay on 03/20/04 at 06:13 PM

I very much like the dynamic of this zenlike piece, Glenn. Sweet stuff! Pe4ce...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/21/04 at 04:30 AM

This is beautiful. How present can drag us back. How the 'effect' can cause a cause as effect in the past. I like this so much.

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/21/04 at 06:09 PM

Beautiful Senryu

Posted by David R Spellman on 04/19/04 at 07:18 PM

A deep and powerful bit of writing here Glenn. Excellent!

Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 12/07/07 at 07:31 AM

Very nice, Glenn! Great visual / emotional comparison. I love the challenge of getting an entire thought down in 3 lines. You've succeeded in doing so in this little gem. :)

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