| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/17/04 at 07:08 PM Visually quite effective Mr. Currier. :) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/18/04 at 11:44 PM lovely analogy... |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 03/18/04 at 11:50 PM this is very deep.....excellent |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/20/04 at 06:13 PM I very much like the dynamic of this zenlike piece, Glenn. Sweet stuff!
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/21/04 at 04:30 AM This is beautiful. How present can drag us back. How the 'effect' can cause a cause as effect in the past. I like this so much. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/21/04 at 06:09 PM Beautiful Senryu |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 04/19/04 at 07:18 PM A deep and powerful bit of writing here Glenn. Excellent! |