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Squall (senryu)

by Glenn Currier


you furious squall
scolding our dusty layers
of complacency

deafening prelude
of their stiletto blindness
to the possible

03/05/2004

Posted on 03/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

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Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/06/04 at 02:21 PM

Is this addressed to the sqall or is it your...sqall? I can see this from both the corners.'Dusty layers of complacency' and 'stiletto blindness to the possible' sounds paradoxical but not on a deeper layer of awareness. This speaks for any SCENE changing the meaning of meaning when SEEN from a different layer.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/08/04 at 05:22 PM

I really like the first one Glenn. Not sure I get the second one though. :o)

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