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Melancholy Muse .:I lost:.
by Cathlyn CartierLonely again,
Only this time by choice,
Sometimes the stakes are too high.
Taking a chance on love...
I gambled and lost. 02/20/2004 Author's Note: Melancholy Muse
Posted on 02/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Cathlyn Cartier
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/20/04 at 08:37 PM ohhhhhh *smack*...powerful stuff girl! But it makes sense. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/21/04 at 03:39 AM Know how this one feels.. and never quite able to say it like this.. *hug*.... sad... but good poetry... |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/21/04 at 07:53 AM ...but you took the risk, that's strong. Life, nor love comes with guarantees...only way to find happiness is living it *hug* |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 02/21/04 at 07:00 PM I'm debating now whether or not the gamble is worth it. LOL I used to always think so, but the pain of losing is deep, huh?
Good stuff (acrostic at that). :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/22/04 at 01:46 AM Succinct and pointed with a littel poignancy. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 02/25/04 at 07:43 PM This is so sad... very strong imagery, but sad. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/17/04 at 03:21 AM The feelings come through with the determination to be Self. Well done, Cathlyn. |
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