| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/13/04 at 02:03 AM this is harsh reflection very nicely portrayed. Great work Rula, i like this one.
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| Posted by Alex Smyth on 02/13/04 at 03:30 AM Yes, our perceptions are made up of myriads of reflections....lovely! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/15/04 at 08:20 AM ‘WE are life giving lights’, so far, we decide to vibrate energies we draw for all the positive sources. Playing active force in turn to awake the sleeping souls, ‘Powering the seeds of Earth to shed their skins’. The light is yet to discover the darkness. Nor can darkness ever meet the light. Eclipse is just a fleeting shadow like a ’fleeting thought’, the momentary shadow of negative emotions, barricading the lights emanating from within. Keep on GLOWING from within. And reflecting the light where ever there is dark. I don’t think this needs any redrafting, unless you feel this fails in presenting the SCENE you have seen. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/17/04 at 12:31 AM magnificent... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/17/04 at 05:48 PM I like how this can be taken as both spritual (as in God) and romantic. Says only what it has to, leaving the rest to the reader's imagination. Kudos! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 02/17/04 at 06:49 PM Profound and spiritual, this speaks to many aspects of Life. |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 02/19/04 at 04:51 AM I like. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/20/04 at 06:41 PM may there be light and soil and open minds enough for seeds to burst their casings and express their commonness and uniqueness and find therein the two no conflict. Wonderfully expressed Rula. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/26/04 at 01:18 PM A perceptive and expansive observation, Rula. Great theme and eloquently stated. Your connection with divinity and nature both present here.
Pe4ce... |
