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we fall like love
by Michele Schottelkorbunder a mystickal moon
we fall like love
somber dancing
gentle hand brushing
into the twilight
of the minds eye
cover me in kisses
from a soul searching gaze
(red wine and white roses)
blushed cheeks painted burgundy
glisten like dewdrops
upon Natures breath
sing to me with the voice
of a thousand angels
(in silence)
the lake of Life is calling
to embrace the bloodfilled heart
that pumps sustenance
into our gentle beings
deep within our yesteryears
a seed flowered passion
two bodies are one
in this myriad of dreams
sleep now,
on the bosom of matrimony peaceful for all eternity02/09/2004 Posted on 02/09/2004
Copyright © 2025 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/04 at 05:44 PM Those last three lines are especially beautiful and speak to me the strongest. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/09/04 at 06:29 PM I like the words added at the ends of lines, ie burgandy, in the colors, and the lake of life. superb. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/10/04 at 03:56 AM oh, that is overwhelmingly beautiful...gave me goosebumps...lovely... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/10/04 at 01:28 PM 'sing to me with the voice of a thousand angels', you did, vibrating beautiful energies."Peaceful for all eternity.You have a beautiful mind, Michele.And such a positive approach towards life and what is.Hats off to you.
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| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 02/10/04 at 06:28 PM **warm smile** This is a very beautiful work of art, it brings a smile to my face just reading it. |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 02/14/04 at 04:42 PM The lines "the lake of Life is calling
to embrace the bloodfilled heart
that pumps sustenance
into our gentle beings" could be interpreted several ways. I interpret it sexually. Water makes me think of making love. I wonder what you intended it to mean. This is very romantic.
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| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/20/04 at 09:47 PM romantic throughout..and powerful trio of lines to end it all...well done Michele! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/26/04 at 11:17 AM I am heartened by your poem and the thought that two would as one eternally |
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