| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/29/04 at 04:50 PM icicle fangs and the bite of cold- awesome! |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 01/29/04 at 06:53 PM brrrrr....great expression! |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/29/04 at 06:56 PM You must have known I was staring up at the onces on my roof edge today, out back. Yes, they are menacing and you describe them perfectly. Well done. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/29/04 at 07:03 PM Made me grab my coat... perfect emotion mixed with imagery. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/29/04 at 07:53 PM Really cool!!! |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/30/04 at 04:02 AM They are menacing looking! Like the haiku :) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/30/04 at 08:34 PM Yes...clever! Great description! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 01/30/04 at 11:30 PM "saber-toothed icicles" - awesome imagery, I got a chill just reading it! Love this :-) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/01/04 at 04:50 AM oh, i love the visuals in this... blessings... |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/01/04 at 06:22 PM A shivering haiku of cool icy blue.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/02/04 at 05:46 PM Yes, quite dangerous at times. There was even a woman killed here in Ottawa a few years back from falling ice. Thanks for the reminder to look up! |
| Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 02/10/04 at 07:14 PM lol :) |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/17/04 at 10:45 PM Clever Haiku :-) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/23/04 at 02:35 AM What a sterling and striking haiku! I can see it perfectly in my mind's eye. Fabulous, David. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/24/04 at 01:56 AM B-r-r-r-r-r-r. Good haiku Dave.....Charlie |
