| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/22/04 at 02:13 PM Sounds as if one is at the cross roads. Sounds like a challange, one is bound to accept and live upto. Sounds like a soul seeking hand of a fellow traveller on a journey on this pathless path. |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 01/23/04 at 03:43 AM *warm smile* Very nice |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/23/04 at 11:40 AM your rhythms are so subtle and sincere, we can't help but sway and echo with our own. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/25/04 at 10:55 PM This an excellent statement of committment, that would make a fabulous opening to a novel. One minor quibble if I may: I'd change this line: to honor sacred rings to: to honor unsacred rings as it seems to contradict the trust and faith of the rest of the poem. |
| Posted by Wendy Geal on 05/24/04 at 10:00 PM i love the title, the poem flows beautifully from beginning to end. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/01/04 at 02:34 PM I love the form, Michele, and the contrast between what seems to be hope and what seems to be reality realized. |
